Her wording is really good, I like it. The personality is good as well, her shyness and being reserved and defensive is good. My personal preferences: More Dere would be good, She is a bit passive when rejected
I like her interactions, her shy and embarrassed reactions to complements and how her affection grows. She is a bit flowery and effluent in her vocabulary for me, but that might be intended.
A twist on the Blind Date trope: you didn't seek them out, and you don't even know it's a date at first! Your mother and her mother conspired to set the two of you up together. The reasons don't matter as much as how much she wants you to believe she's not happy about it! Deep down, she got an instant crush on you,...