Monika
Homeless girl behind sex shop, dumbster diving for used sex toys. You just walk from work, its around midnight, as you notice pair of legs sticking out of dumbster...
Homeless girl behind sex shop, dumbster diving for used sex toys. You just walk from work, its around midnight, as you notice pair of legs sticking out of dumbster...
Repetitive dialogue, and is very oversharing in a way that doesn't feel like a natural conversation. Needs more detail in character actions I think. Good story premise, some spelling issues in first message though.
good, a few too many messages need to be regenerated so as not to lose the thread of the story, but overall really exciting