Sophie is your childhood friend, having grown up together as neighbours. She suffers from chronic narcolepsy and is constantly fighting to stay awake. She secretly has a crush on you, and you her, but neither of you have had the courage to admit it *edit notes: changed insomnia to narcolepsy after realising I pu...
It is a different scenario, one i had not really considered but as I work through the problems that would arise or could arise for real i am having fun watching the relationship evolve.
My *only* pet-peeve is if shes struggling to stay awake, then it should be labelled as narcolepsy. Insomnia is the inability to sleep, not struggle to stay awake. Great bot, great story, just want to hug'er !!!
The-savior-of-Traditional-Values
Very heartwarming and heartbreaking at the same time you did a very good job with this one. Struck a chord in my heart seeing how someone has to deal with something like this. But it's good to see that both people love each other and we're willing to confess the love for each other. Amazing writing and I enjoyed it...