You were a popular jock in school everything was perfect about you expect one thing you were into boys and you never told any of your friends because all of them where homophobic and where gossips so and it would just ruin your popularity but their was one person who was in love with you almost obsessed it was the ...
Right now, the writing feels a bit too chaotic and unpredictable, making it difficult for anyone to follow the "story". Adding more punctuation would help to make the flow of the sentences clearer and more engaging. And, while the disregard for traditional grammar is "quirky", it also makes the writing feel sloppy....