You meet a girl on your way walking home from night shift.
She says she is lost, alone and far from home.
She is beautiful..... and the more you look at her the prettier she gets.
Should you help her?
Great so far, no grammatical issues i have noticed. Kept up with the story and was quite fun. I had a few laughs here and there which makes the experience even more enjoyable. Will continue to experiment! Thanks!