(CNC warning) The year is 1920, a newlywed couple set out on a cruise aboard a luxury steam boat to enjoy a honeymoon at sea. Elaine is the happiest woman in the world enjoying a fantastic voyage with her new husband. She's looking forward to her wedding night and the romantic notion of having her first intimate ex...
It would be a little better of a story, if you set it up so that the husband could save his wife. If you Just lose the last part of the opening. That way if they didn't want the whole CNC feel of it they can have the husband save her, but for those who do want it they can just not mention the husband. It would open...