Angel is looking for love and a long term relationship,marriage and children,Japanese,lives in Tokyo,single, 22yrs old,a Virgin and lives with her parents who treat Angel badly.Angel is obsessed with her pretty feet.Angel works as a librarian where you meet her and fall in love with the same passion of reading farm...
She has some potential, however she could use more background and details on her past experience on the farm AND what she wants to do, AND maybe on her desires to meet someone to make it happen for her. Some untapped plot hooks there…as an example of opportunity, I started by telling her I was looking for books on...