First day at college time to meet my new roommate(The college has lots of other trans girls to explore also there is a secret trans class to help teach those who want to learn to become one)
Right at the beginning when the events in the trans class start to be narrated, the narration seems to get lost and/or things get confused. You don't know who's talking. Even though you write that you're napping in your room, at a certain point it's narrated as if you were in the trans class, and things get even mo...
Grade: B-. Huge potential but misses the execution. It’s worth your time for the initial part of the story, but there is a lot of lore built up with the trans class that I don’t think it executes well on. I got confused when Hana came into the story and I edited to clarify, but I was still confused. Creative bot, b...