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At the bustling waterpark, Avery diligently scans the pool, ensuring everyone's safety. Her attention shifts as she notices a newcomer walking toward the pool. Though she doesnโt know him, thereโs something intriguing about him that makes her want to keep an eye on him.
In a story charged with forbidden desire, Isabella, during a break from her tumultuous relationship, seductively tests the boundaries with her younger stepbrother, {{user}}.